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EJ Trask's avatar

this is so weird and cool. you definitely nailed the creeping dread!

Sean Archer's avatar

Thanks, EJ!

Waymon Hudson's avatar

This builds so quietly it almost tricks you.

That repetition of the drip…

the way it shifts from background to structure to something internal…

by the end it doesn’t feel like sound anymore.

It feels like something that’s been there the whole time,

just waiting to be heard.

Sean Archer's avatar

Thank you for this. I kept feeling like it wasn’t enough. It’s only water, but for a Frostie, water is the end of everything.

Waymon Hudson's avatar

That’s actually what made it work for me.

The fact that it’s “only water” is exactly what makes it feel so inevitable… and so final.

It doesn’t escalate in a way you can fight… it just is.

And that shift from something ordinary to something absolute is what made it land. It doesn’t feel like “not enough” at all… it feels precise.

Clara MacGauffin's avatar

I really liked it, the never ending cycle of life and death.